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"Lefty & The Boxcar"

A bit of a hiatus, but we're back with a brand-new Sigler fan-fiction story. "Lefty & The Boxcar features the character Lefty from the KISSMYAN stories. If you haven't heard KISSYMAN & THE GENTLEMAN, check that out here.

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Sounds good dude.

Well done.

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Left and the Boxcar

Sounds great! Can't wait to hear Part 2!

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Good story

 

To be honest, Arioch, I think you're trying a bit too hard on the accents. It was a cool bonus to hear an actual woman's voice doing...a woman's voice! And I completely understand your reason for doing so. It seems like the other accents were a bit inconsistent.

I really enjoyed the story, and look forward to part two. It seems that the place where part 1 ends is a good transition/cliffhanger spot. Well, maybe not so much cliffhanger, but definitely a logical spot to put a break. Can't wait for the next one!

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Gutter Sistren whipping boy, innoventor of words, Life Coach to the Damned.

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Gutter Sistren whipping boy, innoventor of words, Life Coach to the Damned.

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All of you NEED to listen to

All of you NEED to listen to Kissyman and the Gentleman!!!! I'm sure you'll all come to see things my way... Or I'll just have to remove you....

"For future reference, I was sort of hoping for a suggestion that didn't sound like it came from that Bolshevik Muppet with all the dynamite.”

- Jim Butcher

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Thanks BigJohn

Thanks for the kind words on the story. Personally I think Aricho's accents were great!!!! You had to pry the smile off my face!

 

Thanks for the listen. Look me up at www.taconoir.com.

Thanks for the listen. Look me up at www.taconoir.com.
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Thanks, John. Constructive criticism is invaluable.

I wasn't sure about the accents, but I knew I slipped into a different narrative voice towards the end of Part 1. Please let me know if you think the problem got better, worse or stayed the same after you hear Part 2 and I'll go from there.

 

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